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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Cold hard truth, I didn't get a huge impact on this at all. There is alot of things that you could have done to improve this!
But I don't really know how old you are, so I can't say if this is bad for your age or amazing for your age.
So I will leave that discussion to yourself.

But, anyway.
My biggest problem with this is that it doesn't have a light source that can be seen. And with that, the shading becomes EXTREMELY confusing.
Because, from what I see is that this picture have 3 light sources, but none matches up the picture.
In otherwords, the atmosphere doesn't say "This is a tough chick that you don't want to mess with"
I feel like it's more welcoming. And confuses with the whole face and concept of her position and face expression.

But I can't say that I didn't like the concept of her standing there with a menacing look and scratches the blackboard.
But I also can't say that I haven't seen it before.

But one thing that bugs me quite a lot is that arm that is shaded the other way. But it is shaded with a much more in depth color values. More darker and lighter at the light side.
But still shaded to the other side, so I can't help to think that it is wrong in a way.


So the points that I want to point out are:
-Where are the lightsource(s)
-Make an atmospheric backgound, so you can live INTO the picture!
-And MUCH more in depth color values. (Tip, Train with black and white. Works AMAZING. And you advances A LOT faster than by using colors)