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I brought back the sleeves But I didn't draw her tail. Unlike Ginger's ears, she can hide her tail from human sight.
Contest:
I brought back the sleeves But I didn't draw her tail. Unlike Ginger's ears, she can hide her tail from human sight.
Contest:
I'VE IMPROVED - CONTESTThe I'VE IMPROVED contest is something that I recently came up with because due to personal reasons I want to get rid of the points I have. If you are interested in joining my contest and earning some points/winning points. I encourage you to join. But, Please read this journal in ALL before deciding. ~ Thank you.
The Rules
1.) You MUST choose an image from YOUR OWN Gallery that you'd like to "improve"
2.) (choice): You have a choice to either do the side by side in ONE image, or in 2 separate images and link me
3.) You MUST either NOTE or COMMENT on this journal to your: 1 (ONE) side by side image or the 2 (TWO) separate images (before/after)
It CAN BE
Traditional or Digital. (writings are not accepted)
Image size
1378x2039px 710.42 KB
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Cold hard truth, I didn't get a huge impact on this at all. There is alot of things that you could have done to improve this!
But I don't really know how old you are, so I can't say if this is bad for your age or amazing for your age.
So I will leave that discussion to yourself.
But, anyway.
My biggest problem with this is that it doesn't have a light source that can be seen. And with that, the shading becomes EXTREMELY confusing.
Because, from what I see is that this picture have 3 light sources, but none matches up the picture.
In otherwords, the atmosphere doesn't say "This is a tough chick that you don't want to mess with"
I feel like it's more welcoming. And confuses with the whole face and concept of her position and face expression.
But I can't say that I didn't like the concept of her standing there with a menacing look and scratches the blackboard.
But I also can't say that I haven't seen it before.
But one thing that bugs me quite a lot is that arm that is shaded the other way. But it is shaded with a much more in depth color values. More darker and lighter at the light side.
But still shaded to the other side, so I can't help to think that it is wrong in a way.
So the points that I want to point out are:
-Where are the lightsource(s)
-Make an atmospheric backgound, so you can live INTO the picture!
-And MUCH more in depth color values. (Tip, Train with black and white. Works AMAZING. And you advances A LOT faster than by using colors)